Interesting story Noah. I like your ideas for your stories, they're imaginative. Go through this story again and read it to yourself to see if the sentences make sense. You'll also be able to see if they spelling and punctuation is right when you re-read it.
Really good story Noah don't know if I would like to find a mean old grumpy man in a cave. Don't forget to re read your stories.
ReplyDeleteInteresting story Noah. I like your ideas for your stories, they're imaginative. Go through this story again and read it to yourself to see if the sentences make sense. You'll also be able to see if they spelling and punctuation is right when you re-read it.
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